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Marking mature for content I've judged to be pretty disturbing. I believe I've invoked some rather disturbing tropes: This, this, this, and this.
Click the above links at your own discretion. The topic of the links may require something, but if you read the story, let me know if you need this.
Written for Jessica-Rae-3's Spooky-Cookie Contest.
I won't say a lot here. Comment below, let me know if you saw the examples of the tropes I linked. There's two that will be painfully obvious when you see them. The other two might be hard to see. Pay close attention to what one character is doing.
The usual questions apply. How did it flow? Spooky enough? Did I cover all the tropes? I know I usually ask a lot of questions, but I don't want to ask so many it gives stuff away. Any thoughts you'd like to share, please feel free.
Thank you.
Click the above links at your own discretion. The topic of the links may require something, but if you read the story, let me know if you need this.
Written for Jessica-Rae-3's Spooky-Cookie Contest.
I won't say a lot here. Comment below, let me know if you saw the examples of the tropes I linked. There's two that will be painfully obvious when you see them. The other two might be hard to see. Pay close attention to what one character is doing.
The usual questions apply. How did it flow? Spooky enough? Did I cover all the tropes? I know I usually ask a lot of questions, but I don't want to ask so many it gives stuff away. Any thoughts you'd like to share, please feel free.
Thank you.
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Good story! I think the best moment is where she says "I think you're quite tasty", it really took me by surprise, and I think some of the story after this moment could be shortened.